
Only a fool will wish upon a falling star
Burning its tail, beyond human reach
Falling stars will wait to fall,
Some old lessons to teach
A bad karma, shooting through the sky
Its brilliance set upon its tail;
Sailing through the night in maddening fervour -
Wishing for one more chance to stay put
In a deep inky ocean of black
Even falling stars can’t go back
Only a fool will take recourse
In prayers set upon a burning tail
Dizzying heights don’t sanction grace
Falling stars won’t make amends -
Falling so deviously into a stretch of eternity
No falling star can hand a pardon for impunity
Only a fool will wish upon a falling star
Romanticised in deep poetic trance
One that falls so unstable
Should not have been so fabled;
At least in its death it could have been spared –
The burden of human addiction for grace
Some more, and then some more
Falling, so dazed –
Into the inevitable;
Whizzing in the night light –
In death, most bright
Singing its swansong
Of old pains, old dreams, all astray
Old scars,
Cosmic whispers, haunting
Only a fool will wish upon a falling star
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Thats Blizz! :-)
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Supriya another nice one...loved the picture too... :)
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Oh ye drunk dimwits
indulging in his friday roses are red
someone hit me! hit me! on da head -
poetic orgies -
you cant make no sylvia cry no more
she's overdosed on tears
and dats for sure :-)
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Ms. Sylvia plath wannabe
Wrote a cry-eeeyyy poem oh ye
all that read weep tears galore
and then beg - they beg for more
:))
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O ye Notoriously charming diwmits... ofcourse I had to fling poo.. once youre bacccccccccckkkkkkkkkkk!!! baybeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
ROFLMAO!!!
yours so unsincerely
sylvia plath wannbe ;-)
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On the good side - I feel like you wrote a whole poem in your sylvia-plathic style just to get me to make a wish ;)) (that's my foolish delusions in overdrive - btw)
Combine that with the fact that you changed your profile pic to flinging poo - I do believe we are back in business baybee :))))
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Oh yea... to speak of fools - I think I have to bear a mortal cross for forgetting your name or something?! ROFL
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Well - you did say that only a *fool* would wish :)) So this dimwit had to make a wish just to protect his *fool*ish status ;))
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Dimwit :-)
Thats a beautiful wish. The sort that can be made upon a dying star :-)
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